Underestimating its value, breakfast is a meal many people skip.
We talked about how this sentence includes a misplaced modifier--though we jump to an assumption that it's the people who underestimate the value of breakfast, the sentence actually provides us an image of breakfast cereal having a sad, existential crisis. We fixed the sentence to clarify that it's the people who underestimate the value of breakfast, not the breakfast itself. I pointed out that one of the best ways to find misplaced modifiers is to create a picture, mental or literal--misplaced modifiers often create hilarious images.
Then, Amanda became our grammatical cartoonist...here's what she created to illustrate the point:
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